the use of jargon or slang. over-complicated or unprofessional language
letting your nerves get the better of you ]lack of interest
distractions or irrelevance in the topic
voice is unclear or very soft
presentation is too long lack preparation
body language is important because it portrays mood and emotions and can emphasise and contradict what you say.
donts- arms kept by sides ,not looking at audience, reading off , dead facial expression
dos- positive facial expression, open body language
what i need to improve - make eye contact , make hand gestures , smile
voice quality
vary vocal quality keeps the audience interested
i need to have a clear voice , project my voice and pace my voice
my mock presentation:
- looked nervous
- mad eye contact
- had good posture
- didn't make much hand gestures
- not much movement
To improve i need to add more gestures and movement
